- father is always buzy and never bring me to go to beach
-finally i manage to go to beach w my father that i've been wishing to do so for long time already
- having fun eating watermelon and playing water. building castle. and maybe after u want to go home, you found a child who is lost at the beach and you n yor father tried to find the kid's mom, and say what do u do , how do you find the mother, and
maybe u can add some conflict which is the kids mom is actually your dad long lost sister/sibling. and so yes...
this is only my opinion :))))) <3