Jawapan

2016-07-16T23:39:34+08:00
I think you misspelled it.

(im gonna give the points)

op-introduce 2 character with a friendly setting.

1st point - make something happen like a little fight between them.

2nd- it goes on and grows bigger.

3rd- the fight made a big effect on both of them.

4th- they tried to be friends again.

Ed- a third person came in and help solve their problems.
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P/S:the ending can be change to something better.